OK, what probably needs doing to this is, probably should but who is singing/saying what in the usual way. Also i think some clarification is needed around the following lines:
"The young sailors
I think they're one and the same
I've heard it too many times to ignore it"
I wasn't really sure what to put there as JoCo sings something different to the audience and it is hard to make out what either sing in the end. I just stuck with the lyrics to rainbow connection i got off the internet for that line. I think those are the only things that stuck out in my mind as needing improving. Apart from I have probably done too much of the talking. --BenS 11:49, 23 May 2008 (EDT)