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("close my eyes and it's all ready. Here on Earth they'll wonder..."?)
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::: Cool, good to hear. I'll go ahead and make the same changes in the [[The Future Soon/Tabs|Tabs]] section. (Yeah, I think it could go either way with "couple skate" and "couples' skate", depending on what JoCo himself says.) (And darn, that was me at the top who forgot to sign his name.) Thanks, Thomast and Bry! || [[User:Wesley|Wesley]] 01:19, 30 April 2008 (EDT)
 
::: Cool, good to hear. I'll go ahead and make the same changes in the [[The Future Soon/Tabs|Tabs]] section. (Yeah, I think it could go either way with "couple skate" and "couples' skate", depending on what JoCo himself says.) (And darn, that was me at the top who forgot to sign his name.) Thanks, Thomast and Bry! || [[User:Wesley|Wesley]] 01:19, 30 April 2008 (EDT)
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::::I've changed the smart quotes, which is the only change I've made that I'm sure about, for I've done a lot of things that are real, real judgment calls. I said "And I'm '''all''' alone during '''couples'''' skate", "'''She'll''' eye me suspiciously" (no "and"), "'''And she'll''' scream and try to run" (instead of "she will scream"), and most radically, during the pre-bridge chorus, "close my eyes and it's '''all ready'''" -> "Here on Earth they'll wonder" (starting a new clause). I'm not sure I even agree with that (granted, "when my heart is breaking I can close my eyes and it's '''already''' / Here on Earth they'll wonder" isn't grammatical, but there's certainly little reason to believe that wasn't what was intended). But it's clever, and it would be grammatical, and I'm going to pretend it's the lyric because it makes me happy to think so. --[[User:Bry|Bry]] 01:29, 30 April 2008 (EDT)

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Riddle me this:

My ears hear "And I'm all alone during couple skate" The info page in the store (and everything in this wiki) reads "And I'm alone during couple skate"

Obviously, and without a doubt, we should use the lyrics actually in the song. But I'm not going insane for hearing that, right?

I agree. That's pretty definitely what's sung. This live performance has a good facial close up during that line, and that looks like two words to me (rather than "ah-ah-lone," for which that subtle mouth closure wouldn't be there). Of course, I would've also sworn to it being "couples' skate," so what do I know? ~ Thomast 18:25, 29 April 2008 (EDT)
I have always thought the words were "And I'm all alone...." I think it's a safe change to make, and I'll make it -- if someone disagrees, he or she can change it back. --Bry 01:14, 30 April 2008 (EDT)
Cool, good to hear. I'll go ahead and make the same changes in the Tabs section. (Yeah, I think it could go either way with "couple skate" and "couples' skate", depending on what JoCo himself says.) (And darn, that was me at the top who forgot to sign his name.) Thanks, Thomast and Bry! || Wesley 01:19, 30 April 2008 (EDT)
I've changed the smart quotes, which is the only change I've made that I'm sure about, for I've done a lot of things that are real, real judgment calls. I said "And I'm all alone during couples' skate", "She'll eye me suspiciously" (no "and"), "And she'll scream and try to run" (instead of "she will scream"), and most radically, during the pre-bridge chorus, "close my eyes and it's all ready" -> "Here on Earth they'll wonder" (starting a new clause). I'm not sure I even agree with that (granted, "when my heart is breaking I can close my eyes and it's already / Here on Earth they'll wonder" isn't grammatical, but there's certainly little reason to believe that wasn't what was intended). But it's clever, and it would be grammatical, and I'm going to pretend it's the lyric because it makes me happy to think so. --Bry 01:29, 30 April 2008 (EDT)